Garrett Kincaid

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August, 2025

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Aug 1
An image that describes dichotomous thinking: Imagine how hard it would be to function if you could only see what’s in your periphery.


My current best (most developed) essay ideas:


“Comparison is the thief of joy”—sure, but let’s challenge that. When is comparison a virtue? Comparison can be the benefactor, or the vehicle for gratitude and self-forgiveness. Compare your circumstances to someone less fortunate, and you are grateful. Compare your worst deeds to the immoral actions of others, and maybe you can forgive yourself and free yourself of the guilt that would otherwise distract you from future good-doing.


Aug 2
Man looks to the creature of the sky and kings to fly, to the creature of the sea and kings to breathe underwater. Then man looks within himself and accepts that he has neither gills nor wings, that he will only ever glide or dive and must return to earth if he is to survive. Man looks within himself and realizes his gift: that he can venture into the sky or the sea, into either side of the dichotomy, and bring the two into harmony.


Aug 4
“The road to Hell is paved with adverbs” (Stephen King, On Writing), but a single apt adverb can be a sentences ticket to heaven.


The Fall is almost the perfect human-origin myth, except for the context we give it that sin is a curse. Sin is a gift and so our banishment from Eden, for it is the combination of being mortal and having divine knowledge that makes us human. Thank God for Eve, the Mother of Man.

[[Eden Is Hell Too]]


Aug 6
To behold Nature’s majesty is to become aware of my own mortality; to become aware of my own mortality is to feel grateful exist with and witness this majesty.


Aug 9
Aug 09, 2025—After hiking Quandary:

Breckenridge is lively today, more lively than in winter. I had lunch alone at the Horseshoe then went out by the Riverwalk to a bench to read. Children are in the river playing. A talented banjo-busker was captivating a crowd, so too a magician around the corner. Then raucous cheers from Breck’s downtown patrons broke out in celebration of a wedding party that was walking along the river together. Every attendee, it seemed—a hundred people easy—were parading, led by the bride and groom who were followed by bridesmaids and groomsman, one of which was holding a boombox on his shoulder. Even though, right now, this is a town full of tourists (for some reason, I’ve seen so many people from KC today, wearing their Royals and Jayhawk gear), the community is strong and free.


No thing can exist as either only yin or yang, for within every thing is the seed of its opposite. The manta ray leaps from the water and glides for a moment like the albatross, as play; the albatross dives beneath the surface and dwells there for a moment like the manta ray, to hunt.


Aug 10
(Near the summit of Mt. Sherman):

One of the greatest virtues in life, and in mountaineering, is to be sure-footed: to select carefully and then commit.


While sitting here on the summit (of Mt. Sherman), eating my trail mix and peering out tens of miles to the horizon (northeast), I saw something that I have never seen, or never noticed, in nature. The sun above is fighting to burn through clouds and peaks through for seconds at a time before being blotted out again. And there are these clumps of cumulus clouds all the way out to the horizon, and between me and the silhouetted mountain ridge in the very distance, the sun is breaking through in many places, touching down. I have marveled before at the shadows that clouds cast on the land when viewed from above, but this is what was new: I see the shadows and highlights in the air, in the air between me and those mountains on the horizon. The clouds cast bands and beams of shadows that alternate with bright columns of light, such that the air itself looks like a set of vertical blinds.


Aug 11
You can see every insect on the surface of the Great Sand Dunes, no matter how small; they’re like ink on blank canvas. You can’t miss 'em. I saw every beetle—winged, either climbing or sliding, and high-contrast black against the yellow-gold.


Aug 16
To resolve a state of discord, [feed/ amplify/nurture] the seed of the opposite.


You want the challenge of your prose to be because of its intellectual content, which is analogous to the natural terrain and slope of a mountain. You do not want your reader to struggle because of the shoddy-ness of the trail.

[[Park-Ranger Revision]]


The stream accomplishes a waterfall not because it strives but because it abides.


The visual datum of my orange rainfly had shrunk to a single pixel.


Your reader needs sufficient (infra)structure and signposting (trailblazes) to be able to navigate on their own—to not get lost and not stumble. The park ranger does not accompany the park’s patrons on their hikes, just as you will not be there to accompany your reader.

[[Park-Ranger Revision]]


August '25 14ers Trip Report

Why did I decide to hike ten peaks above 14,000 feet in one month? To challenge myself, to experience the best of Colorado, and most of all to prove to myself that I’m someone who keeps my word—to stop feeling like I’ve fallen behind on my commitments to myself.


I’m a better writer than almost every skier and a better skier than almost every writer, so consider hiring me to write about skiing.


Every image you conjure in your reader’s mind must have a conceptual payoff, or at least a deep relevance to either the action or the argument.

[[Imagery Palette]]


Aug 09, 2025: Notes from Quandary Peak


Aug 10, 2025: Notes from Mt. Sherman


Aug 12, 2025: Notes from Mt. Bierstadt


Aug 16, 2025: Notes from the Decalibron


Aug 17
Aug 17, 2025: Notes from Mt. Elbert @ 6:30


I believe in the concept of sin in so far as the fact that we “miss the mark,” which is sin’s etymological origin. But I disagree that it’s a curse or something to be rid of. Here’s a more life-affirming way to look at sin: as the ability to aim.


Like Sisyphus, we must be happy to climb and to die on the ascent, without reaching our destinations. But otherwise, human life is not quite Sisyphean. Sisyphus knows what’s coming. Sisyphus is immortal. And Sisyphus gets to descend his hill, whereas we are always climbing.


The albatross and the manta ray are good stands-ins for the archetypal masculine and feminine. The albatross is ambitious, skilled, violent, protective; the manta ray is mysterious, chaotic, playful, receptive.


When I read Genesis as a man-made myth, I can’t help but think that we created it as a way to divinely—and for all eternity—justify our insecurities and self-loathing. Being ashamed of nakedness, for instance, is something to overcome, not something to accept as a hand-me-down trait of the human condition.


Aug 20
Aug 20, 2025: Notes from my first visit to Created Butte’s Secret Stash Pizza


Aug 21
It’s a miracle the way that light moves through trees.


I looked at the map on the counter between us and saw how far F570 was from the footprint of the glacier. At no point on that route had my toes even touched the ice.


Aug 22
Aug 22, 2025: Notes from Sunshine via Redcloud

5:15 a.m. – 12:45 p.m.


Springboard: What’s a goal you have that you have yet to pursue, and how much time and money would it take to make a dent in it?

[[August '25 14ers Trip Report]]


Annie Dillard’s greatest strength is also her greatest weakness, which is her self-indulgence. It seems that she follows every thought she has and later restructures her chapters to make those seemingly divergent thoughts relevant and coherent. Rather than choosing the most apt simile, for instance, she will give you three. It creates the effect of winding through another’s mind—an exceptionally perceptive mind—, but it can be exhausting and disorienting.


Aug 23
Essay idea: Do a character study of the female-counterpart characters in film, describing two main archetypes: the woman who pulls the ambition out of the lost man (makes the heavy lighter), and the woman who grounds the lofty man and captures his attention (makes the light heavier).

I could call these the Muses and the Sirens. The muse inspires you, fills your lungs with air and makes you more buoyant. The siren pulls you down, maybe under, and distracts you from the path you were on, forces you to consider something else, something different, to reconsider your values.

Some examples of Muse characters:

Some examples of Siren characters:


The memory of the muse may be more potent than the moment of connecting with the muse herself. You inevitably inflate and exaggerate all of her best characteristics, and it is the memory of the muse to which we all aspire.

(Example: Truman, in The Truman Show clipping apart the faces of female models in magazines to try to reconstruct his memory of Sylvia)


I like towns that are small enough where there’s about one store-front for everything, and they’re all simply named—for example—Telluride Window Treatments. As a bonus, towns this size have several highly curated and creative restaurants whose names and dishes are both unique and perfectly suited to the town (in Telluride, there’s a mushroom theme: Telluride Truffle Chocolates is two doors down from Wood Ear, which is a Texas BBQ–inspired ramen place).


Aug 24
Imagery Palette

Every piece of writing—whether a chapter or an essay or whatever—needs to have its own imagery palette, like the room of any home needs a color palette. Figurative language and comparisons are valuable and essential for captivating readers, yet maybe the best way to describe the common error of “purple prose” is that the figurative language of the piece bleeds outside of the imagery palette. You want to have a related cluster of images, not a sporadic, haphazard collage of clashing colors.


Aug 25
Twice today I’ve read about The Great Unconformity (first in a spiral-bound, self-published book on Ouray geology in the Ouray Bookstore and just now on an infographic by the high bridge above of Box Canyon). That term describes a billion-year gap in our understanding of the sedimentation of the San Juan–Uncompaghre region, which understanding is otherwise complete—without any gaps—stretching back to the pre-Cambrian era. Geologists make pilgrimages to Box Canyon to see this mysterious, unreconcilable strata in the sheer walls of the creek, apparently to marvel at it and sear for clues that would help us make sense of how it happened. With my untrained eye, I would never have guessed it to be an “unconformity,” and given the strata’s vertical height, I would have never guess that it accounts for an entire billion-year period of rock-action.


Aug 26
In my writing, I don’t want my meaning to be so opaque as to confuse and I don’t want it to be so overt as to bore. I ought to weave many meanings together into a tapestry with enough variety and intricacy that the reader must get involved, lean in to inspect it, and engage in meaning-making.


Aug 26, 2025, on the Bridal Veil Falls Trail:

I’ve seen some fallen heart-shaped, yellow leaves on the trails over the last couple of weeks, but today the Aspen have turned yellow in mass, at least in the hills above Telluride. Even just a few hundred feet lower on the trail, the bushy tips of the Aspen arrows are more green.


Aug 27
The interrogative mood and the subjunctive tense are unrepresented in contemporary American nonfiction, which means that we are not asking enough questions and are a little too certain of our [answers/convictions].